This short film about smoking is filled with forced comedy, poor audio, and a basic visual of a man in a wheelchair. If appears as though the creator is trying to poke fun at the risks smoking entails, but does so in a poor manner.

Concept was good, but the music in the beginning was overpowering. A better balance between SFX and music would bump the stars. Wasn't 100% sure what aspect you were going with either, as it had both a Dragonball Z feel and a Mortal Combat feel.

This short clip had a sense of being rushed. The graphics were decent, but the voice-over is what killed it for me. The biggest factor was there was nothing really to the clip. What was the purpose of the film?

Good concept, but it lacks any certain return. A game you'd play once for a few minutes, and then move onto the next.

The idea is there, but lacks so much. This has the possibility to be so much more. It's a good start, but build on what you have here. And for the love of all things music, please get that thing off of loop.